Another excerpt from my teen fantasy adventure 'Do You Believe in Magic?'
Thanks Daniel! The full chapters, of course, have a lot more detail. But at least it's a taste.
Thanks, Alexander! Yes, it is Inkarnate. I think the map turned out pretty well.
Great excerpt Jim. I like how you blended teenage awkwardness along with the doom filled dialogue of the battle. Keeps the large scale consequences intimate in relation to the characters
Map looks really good as well 👍🏼
I liked that bit of dialogue! Nice work, Jim. Need to check out the rest of the excerpts. Love the map, too. Inkarnate?
Thanks Daniel! The full chapters, of course, have a lot more detail. But at least it's a taste.
Thanks, Alexander! Yes, it is Inkarnate. I think the map turned out pretty well.
Great excerpt Jim. I like how you blended teenage awkwardness along with the doom filled dialogue of the battle. Keeps the large scale consequences intimate in relation to the characters
Map looks really good as well 👍🏼
I liked that bit of dialogue! Nice work, Jim. Need to check out the rest of the excerpts. Love the map, too. Inkarnate?